L3 - GROUP 6 (Sophie & Charna) Film Opening Rough Cut from cmdiploma on Vimeo.
After we had finished our rough-cuts, they were shown to the rest of the class, so we could have some feedback on them about what were the strengths and what were the weaknesses with our film opening. I think the piece of music in the middle of the rough-cut, is suited best to our opening, because it is mysterious and eerie, which helps set the scene.
1. What did people rate as the strengths of the work?
The shots and angles give a full view of the frame. The dark background works well with the bright fire and how the titles are positioned.
2. What did the people rate as weaknesses?
The music has not been timed very well with each shot, doesn't fit in with the plot of the film. The opening looks more like a trailer, because of the layout and the order of the titles.
3. What do you intend to change?
Change the music, because it doesn't fit the opening. maybe put dialogue in, so people understand what is going on.
4. What is still to be done? e.g titles, sound, visuals
Change it slightly to make it look and feel like an opening. Don't need to add anything else
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