Wednesday 28 October 2009

Feedback on Sven and Jahmal's opening sequence

L3 - GROUP 7 (Jahmal & Sven) Film Opening Rough Cut from cmdiploma on Vimeo.



1.What are the strengths of the work?
There are a range of different shots used, and angles. I liked the part of the sequence where the two characters pass each other in slow motion.

2. What are the weaknesses of the work?
There is no sound or titles. Also there is no dialogue, so the viewer does not really know what is happening.

3.What should be changed?
None of the footage needs to be changed.

4.What is still to be done? e.g titles, sound, visuals
Sound and titles still need to be done.

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